Thursday, September 15, 2011

Broken Dreams


I walk alone tonight after our fight.
No one pays me a passing glance.
I hear the earth moving, but I'm standing still.
I walk alone.

I walk alone.
The pain of the living engulfs me and throws me out.
Shattered bottles, tattered homes.
There's nothing for me to do; I walk alone.

I walk alone as others laugh and smile.
I kick a rock in my path and watch it tumble away.
The pale street lights flicker menacingly.
I walk alone.

I walk alone.
Nothing but trash blows in the frigid wind.
I can't feel, my body's gone numb.
I can't see, my perceptions gone.
I can't breathe the air is suffocating.
I walk alone.

I walk alone.
The world is too loud yet too quiet.
No where to run and no where to hide.
I walk alone.

I walk alone.
The wet concrete reflects my dark mood.
I can't breathe, am I drowning?
The walls around me collapse.
 I walk alone. 

~Silver Sun

3 comments:

  1. One word- Wow!

    That was so good, almost like a song or a poem. It flowed really well.

    Again, that was amazing.

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  2. Great flowing, I really liked the last paragraph. Keep it up!

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  3. I really like this verse!
    The world is too loud yet too quiet.
    No where to run and no where to hide.

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